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Ripped Reflect

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This is a time for reflection
A time to think
Medidate in silence.

Then
Raindrops fall.

Some fall on ground
Breaking
With the subtle sound
Of breaking hearts.

Some fall on pondwater
Disappear into the masses
No longer distinguishable
From the rest.




Slowly



More fall


Faster

Harder

With an alien urgency

Attacking
Like tears turned to ice
The reflection is shattered
Waterlogged thoughts

I am no longer me.
Actually the title is a sort of pun on the actual words 'rippled reflection'. I chose the title because although it was water, the whole image was shattered, or ripped to put it another way. And well, the word reflect because...like the first line, "a time for reflection".

I won't say how I feel about it. Just tell me how you feel, and criticize (but not too harshly, I am very sensitive ;))
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calypso-crescent's avatar
LOve the spacing... can really feel water flowing:nod: